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PostSubject: Re: anakin solo <<Rejected>>   Wed Jun 23, 2010 1:15 pm
Sergei Meranov wrote:
That's a good start. It's still a bit short, but that could be intentional, which is fine. I'd like you to go back through and clean up the grammar and spelling a bit, just to increase the readability. Also, if you feel like it, you can flesh out the bio even more. Look in our Open RP forums for a guide I posted that has some questions to ask that might help you flesh out your character.
sure ill fix it. and yea being short was a little intentional if I am accepted I will definitely go to the thread for it and make a longer version. I just don't want to get dug in too deep because I still might get declined Neutral
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PostSubject: Re: anakin solo <<Rejected>>   Thu Jun 24, 2010 4:11 pm
changing your name would be important... Anakin Solo is a cannon name... You can better think of something else bro.

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PostSubject: Re: anakin solo <<Rejected>>   Thu Jun 24, 2010 8:45 pm
My apologies for doing this late, but I didn't want to make a social faux pas by overstepping my bounds. Either way, as the new guy around town, I would like to say Hello and welcome!
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PostSubject: Re: anakin solo <<Rejected>>   Fri Jun 25, 2010 1:01 pm
Anakin Solo isn't their character name ... just forum handle (unless it was changed to Yohan after Titan posted).

I'm Stella Eisaran the Interim RP Director. Come to me if you have any trouble with RP ideas, fleshing out stories, etc. Send me a PM!

Don't feel intimidated or anything when you are asked to redo some things. They have great spellcheckers out there as well as grammar. And it does help with reading as these old eyes have trouble.

Welcome to the boards and look around!
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PostSubject: Re: anakin solo <<Rejected>>   Tue Jun 29, 2010 10:25 pm
The leadership has decided to decline your application for the time being. Feel free to reapply at a later date if you'd like another shot.

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